Soo, this is the first time I'm ever participating in a 'blog hop'; let's hope it works! For this week's 'wip it up Wednesday', I've decided to share an excerpt from one of my current works in progress: working title: 'Finding Herself'...
'Well? Would you live happily ever after with Colin?'
'Well? Would you live happily ever after with Colin?'
Damn.
'I... I'm not sure. He and I, well, we're different in a lot of ways.
He's very sweet, though, and has always been kind to me.'
Reaching out, Leon slowly
wrapped her long hair around his fist and drew her face up until she
was looking directly into his eyes. 'You need more though, don't you
girl?' he growled, his voice reverberating through her very soul.
'You need a strong man who knows what he wants and won't take any
crap from you. You need a man who will love you and cherish you, and
hurt you, and fuck you like you've never been fucked before.'
Almost instantly, Kimba was once
again reduced to a quivering mass of desire as she heard the words
she had only ever imagined said to her, late at night, as she
feverishly masturbated, alone. 'Yes Sir,' she whispered, her voice
thick with lust.
'I thought so.' He let go of her
hair and settled back down into his seat, lifting his half-smoked
cigarette to his lips and picking up his coffee as if nothing had
happened. As if the girl beside him wasn't almost trembling with the
sudden need to have him deep inside her until she was screaming.
How
does he do it?
How
can a couple of mere sentences reduce me to such a keening, wanton
little slut?
she wondered, squeezing her thighs together in an unconscious attempt
to regain some semblance of self-control.
'I want to fuck you, Kimba,' he
spoke suddenly, calmly. 'I've had a borderline painful hard-on since
the instant you walked through the front door – and I prefer to
dish pain out, not suffer it. So if you agree to let me share your
bed tonight, you have been warned. It's your choice.'
Taking a deep, shuddering
breath, Kimba extinguished what was left of her cigarette and drank
the last mouthful of coffee before setting down her mug. When she
finally answered him, it was with a single word. 'Yes.'
Any sane women in the universe would say yes after that little discussion. Ooh what a man! I want him... Great snippet :)
ReplyDeleteYay, thank you Christina! Glad you enjoyed it - and I agree with you, who would say no? Really? lol
DeleteTabitha, welcome to Wip It Up and congratulations on your first blog hop. You're excerpt is smoking hot, girl.
ReplyDeleteHearing a man tell me what I wanted, what I needed, would have me trembling with need too.
Now you've got me thinking ahead to what he's going to do to her. Mm, mm, mm.
Thank you, Melody, and thank you for letting me be a part of this. I do intend to participate often, it's a brilliant idea for a blog hop. :)
Deletewhat a wonderfully hot snippet! welcome to the hop, glad you joined us. her thigh pressing is quite a touch :)
ReplyDeleteAw, thank you Joelle! I picked a silly week to start, considering I was out of town for 5 days, but am still very glad I took part.
DeleteGreat snippet! Leon seems like the perfect man for Kimba. Welcome to the Blog Hop! ;-)
ReplyDeleteIt's great to be here Meredith, thank you! Yes, it always makes me happy when two characters have chemistry... alas, it wouldn't be any fun if there weren't some obstacles though, right? :P
DeleteGreat snippet Tabitha! Very hot and makes me want to read more!
ReplyDelete*Squee* thank you, namesake! There will be more, I promise... :)
DeleteOh God, I have just fallen in love with Leon. That was hot. Don't you dare let her marry Colin :)
ReplyDeleteOoh, that would be a twist, wouldn't it? Hadn't even considered it... but no, I don't think she'll end up going back to vanilla once Leon's made his mark on her. Hehe.
DeleteNice tease ... and welcome to the Hop! Oh, to finally hear the words she only imagines in her head! I'd be a quivering mass, too! Where in the HELL is this man ... I want him!! :)
ReplyDeleteNo kidding, you and me both. Such a shame we can't write our fictional heroes into being... there'd be a lot of very happy girls out there. Thank you Shelly.
DeleteLeon does not mince words, Colin doesn't stand a chance.
ReplyDeleteVery nice scene.
Aw, Leigh, thank you so much!
DeleteVery Hot! I love your style. Im going to need more though...
ReplyDeleteAsk and you shall receive. If you're a good girl, that is. Hehe *hugs*
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