For this week, I've decided to share one more excerpt from my current wip, tentatively titled, "Initiation". I know it would be far kinder of me to post excerpts in order, so you guys can see what happens next, but I'd rather keep the surprise element intact and not give too much away. So with that in mind, here's another random snippet...
"In there," he said,
pointing to a small pathway veering off to the right.
In her tight, lacy camisole top, even
tighter miniskirt and sky-high heels showing off endless, tanned legs, Chloe
exuded sex from every pore. Throwing him a seductive, lingering glance over her
shoulder, she paused. "That way?"
He gave a curt nod and waited for her
to keep walking.
"Oh," she exclaimed a
moment later. "How exciting! Stocks!"
"It's a pillory, actually,"
Dain heard himself saying. "Stocks are usually for the feet. Pillory is
for the hands and neck."
Chloe shrugged. "Same
difference." She tilted her head to one side with a coy smile. "So…
we're here. What was it you wanted to have a little chat with me about?"
"This." He pulled a piece
of paper from his pocket.
"What's that?"
"It's a note, from Sir Simeon.
He tells me you seem to have a problem with getting to work on time."
Infuriatingly, she giggled. "Is
that so?"
Dain didn't smile back. "It is.
So what's your excuse? It can't be the traffic."
"No, I suppose living and
working in the same place do have some drawbacks."
He narrowed his eyes, deliberately
and coolly holding her gaze until the amusement vanished from her exquisite
features.
"Am I in trouble?"
"You could say that."
"I-I thought Sir Simeon would be…"
Dain raised a single eyebrow, still
regarding her with contemplative detachment. It was working, she was growing
more unsettled by the second. "You thought Sir Simeon would what?"
Chloe dropped her gaze to the rich
green grass. "I thought he'd be the one… the one dealing with… this sort
of thing," she finished, lamely.
He shrugged. "Well, he isn't. Is
that a problem?"
She shook her head, her golden
ponytail swishing against the nape of her slender neck.
"What did you think I wanted to
have a chat with you about?" He couldn't resist asking.
An adorable flush spread up across
her cheeks at that, and Dain had to bite back a smile. Still, he waited for her
reply.
"I-I don't know," she
muttered eventually. "Not… this."
Interesting. The glamour puss likes to pretend to be far more
worldly and unfazed by everything than she really is. With a completely steady hand, he unfolded the note and scanned it
briefly before putting it back in his pocket. He was careful to keep his tone
stern.
"Chloe, you have been late for
work no less than four times in less than a fortnight. That is unacceptable.
Sir Simeon is not impressed, and has asked me to deal with you as I see fit, as
per your signed agreement when you commenced employment here. Do you consent to
my punishing you?"
She hesitated.
Dain was in no hurry. It had been too
long since he'd been able to indulge himself in this way. He waited, savouring
the torrent of emotions as they flitted across her face; panic, lust, curiosity,
uncertainty—even a little tiny bit of fear. Good. Fear was good.
Her answer, when it finally came, was
a tremulous whisper. "Yes."
"Yes, what?"
Her dark blue eyes swivelled back up
to meet his for a brief moment before once more settling on the ground.
"Yes, Sir."
"Good girl. Not a complete
novice, then." Then, lowering his voice, "Take off your
clothes."
"I—what?" Her eyes were so
wide her long lashes touched her brows.
"You heard me. Everything but
the heels. I want you completely naked."
She looked around, her hands
instinctively fluttering to her breast and sex, even though she was still fully
dressed.
And now, if you haven't already, I highly recommend you check out the undoubtedly great excerpts from the lovely authors in the links below! Go on... you know you want to!
Oh goodness, does the girl know what she's getting into with a pillory?
ReplyDeleteI think she's going to regret being so cocky once she's encased in that device. ~giggles~ and she's going to deserve it too. ☺
LOL you bet she deserves it. It could have been easy for her but alas... someone got cocky. So glad you enjoyed it! :)
DeleteGood lord! this is amazing.. your writing is always so clear, yet so evocative and paints a vivid picture. Great snippet!
ReplyDeleteNaws *blushes* thank You, You're too kind. <3
DeleteI love this! Then again, anything with a pillory has my attention. :) Hot scene with good tension. ~Livia
ReplyDeleteThank you Livia! And I agree... there's something pretty sexy about a pillory. Woot!
Deletehehe, I love jumping around too, Tabitha :). This WIP seems pretty promising. I'd love to read more. It seems a fun mixture to me of titles within a contemporary setting; I love that balance.
ReplyDeleteGlad to know I'm not the only one! Thank you. Not sure what you mean by 'mix of titles' though - this is one book, not an anthology. I just decided to do it a little differently and weave in more than one storyline this time. More opportunities for fun!
DeleteOoh ... "Now" is not a good sign for her ... but it is for us! Delicious :)
ReplyDeleteI know, right? When a hot guy says 'Now' in *that* tone of voice... yummo! Thank you :)
DeleteOoo my, now, please yes, more. Nothing like an unexpected punishment and a pillory.
ReplyDeleteIsn't that one of the best things a reader can say to an author? "More, please?" Thank you.
DeleteLove the build up and his enjoyment!
ReplyDeleteThank you. It's fun trying to balance building enough chemistry/tension without dragging it on too much, isn't it?
DeleteShe isn't as brave as she lets on. Poor thing. :)
ReplyDeleteNo, but she's still going to be taken down a peg.:)
DeleteI totally want some more of this story! It sounds like its going to be fantastic!
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